I'm confused.... you already submitted this one a month ago, so what is the point? But after viewing your other art, which I find a lot better, I would not submit this kind of stick comics anymore, if I was you. Or at least you could add some details like chairs and items on the desk, or you could colour it. I'm just thinking out loud here.... :)
Kinsei
I can understand about not having it public defeating the purpose of people voting on it and seeing it. but at least it will be eligible for reviews.
also like the guy in the last blog post said, put it in the art forum, you can get all kinds of feedback for there.